II. Edit the following passage. There is an error in each line. Write the incorrect word and the correction. incorrect correction 1. Wander along the streets of NewYork city, (a) my daughters and me stop at shoe stores wherever (b) we happens to be. This is their choice. These, who (c) as little girl, teetered around the house (d) balance like cranes in my mother’s high heels. (e) I sits on the bench and wait while they try on (f) shoe on shoe readjusting their position (g) in a mirror , eyes downcast considering their feet. (h) 2. Music therapy use music to improve the patient’s (a) health. It is used with individuals of all ages. It helps in (b) curing a variety of medical problems as substance abuse and (c) aging. It is also used to improve in learning and reduces stress. (d)

Analyze lowell’s use of symbolism in the poem “for the union dead.” explain how lowell’s use of symbolism to develop one or more themes in the text.

Read sentence 13 from the draft. some plants retain a great deal of their foliage through much of the spring and summer, but the leaves do not retain their green color for long. which detail would be best to add after sentence 13 to develop the topic? a. since the green color of the leaves that are bright and abundant during the warmer months will disappear by the time it is fall, it is important that the leaves are trimmed and kept freshly cut so that they will last for as long as possible. b. while the temperature outside may dictate when the fall colors of leaves appear, it is only one of many environmental factors that play a part in the changing of colors from green leaves to fall-colored leaves during the cooler months. c. if people want to enjoy the green color of leaves longer, trees should be planted where the environment is warmer and the days longer because chlorophyll in the leaves can only be manufactured and replaced with sunlight and warmth. d. the green chlorophyll normally masks the fall-colored pigments during the warmer months, but as sunlight becomes less abundant and trees become frozen, the fall colors of leaves become more visible as chlorophyll disappears.

What logical prediction can be made from this passage?