Can someone fix the grammar and the punctuation of the sentence plz I fixed some of it but my teacher is heavily grading the spelling and punctuation and grammar

I like that the film version tells the story better for Jim Valentine because In the film we can get a better idea of what the characters look like. The film version gives us something that we can’t experience in a book like the emotions and the facial expression for example when the character is in a sad scene you cant see how they react in a book but in the film, you can see how they react if there sad or happy And the picture of the setting we can really hear how the music goes with the play the lighting will get darker and in emotional scene and get brighter and a happy scene the scenes are better portrayed in the film. in the text you can't hear their tone or you cant see the setting or the characteristics of the character and you cant see the lighting can be dark or bright according to the setting, In conclusion, the film version is better at telling the story of Jim Valentine because it gives us a better picture of the story.

I like that the film version tells the story better for Jim Valentine because in the film we can get a better idea of what the characters look like. The film version gives us something that we can’t experience in a book like emotions and facial expressions. For example, when the character is in a sad scene you can’t see how they react in a book but the film, you can see how they react. Also the picture of the setting we can hear how the music goes. With the play, the lighting will get darker and in the emotional scenes and get brighter and a happy scene. The scenes are best portrayed in the film. In the text, you can't hear their tone or you can’t see the setting or the characteristics of the character. In conclusion, the film version is better at telling the story of Jim Valentine because it gives us a better picture of the story.

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i hope this helps i revised it a bit added puctuations comas and fixed run on sentences

I like that the film version tells the story better for Jim Valentine because in the film we can get a better idea of what the characters look like. The film version gives us something that we can’t experience in a book like emotions and facial expressions. For example, when the character is in a sad scene you can’t see how they react in a book but the film, you can see how they react. Also the picture of the setting we can hear how the music goes. With the play, the lighting will get darker and in the emotional scenes and get brighter and a happy scene. The scenes are best portrayed in the film. In the text, you can't hear their tone or you can’t see the setting or the characteristics of the character. In conclusion, the film version is better at telling the story of Jim Valentine because it gives us a better picture of the story.

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i hope this helps i revised it a bit added puctuations comas and fixed run on sentences ik because i am in the future

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quite an interesting way to teach topic sentences, because the answer to this question is the best definition of a topic sentence that one can present, it is as if answering the questions taught you how to do it, this is some real teaching, it is terribly well-done.

the topic sentence in this paragraph is:

topic sentences writers stay on track and keep a paragraph from becoming an aimless collection of sentences about an idea.

which incidentally tells you what a topic sentence should be.