Which revision would most improve this paragraph? adding a topic sentence to the paragraph rewriting sentences that stray from the focus of the paragraph fixing spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors in the paragraph adding transitions to connect ideas within the paragraph

he wants to suppress a potential uprising of the animals.

he wants to distract the animals from learning the truth.

he wants to prove to the other animals that he is

powerful

explanation:

i dont care if you mark brainliest cause im not desperate

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

different strategies reach different people based on their ability to understand the material. (from personal experience) when writing an argumentative essay write explaining the subject as though your audience never heard of it before and it is just being introduced, then explain why other people hate it also, afterward you would explain why that would be wrong. i hope that : )

you should ask "yourself is it good enough? "