please help my friend needs 4 pages about water safety about the ocean and children drowning please help its overdue and i dont want her to fail you dont have to write it all just a little bit please nothing stolen

Ask yourself all of the following questions before you even consider submitting your essay for grading. if your answer to even one of these questions is no, then you still have some work to do. does my introduction attempt to “hook” the reader? does my essay have a clear and specific thesis statement? does my essay accurately tell my story? does my essay indicate why i’m telling my story? have i described only my own experiences? have i used the first-person point of view (the pronoun “i”) throughout the essay? have i clearly indicated where paragraphs begin and end? does each of my paragraphs support my thesis statement? does my conclusion summarize and give closure to my essay? have i effectively proofread my essay? have i met the length requirement? is my essay formatted according to the instructions?

Which sentence will fatima’s teacher most likely ask her to revise?

Drag the tiles to the boxes to form correct pairs. match each excerpt to the type of characterization it uses.