Using the information in the following passage, describe how point of view helps create suspense for the reader. My Response
Maya disliked the desert because she was afraid of
snakes. She had only agreed to go hiking because her
friend Melissa had guaranteed they wouldn't come across
any snakes. But even with her friend's promises, instead of
enjoying the scenery, Maya was scanning the desert floor
for any sign of movement.
"Maya, quit staring at the ground and look at this awesome
view," said Melissa, thinking that Maya was being a baby
and there was nothing to worry about. Maya knew that
Melissa was right, so she tried to relax and enjoy their hike,
Deep in conversation, neither girl heard the rattle of the
snake hidden on the trail up
ahead. maya disliked the desert because she was afraid of snakes.