Write a narrative story about a specific event in your life. It can be a happy story, sad story, funny, exciting or just something you remember happening. Be sure to tell the story with lots of details (the weather, laughter, crying, outfits, etc). Must be at least 10 sentences.

What makes this part of the anecdote about elisa effective? when [elisa] finally walks home, after seven hours of standing at a cash register, her feet hurt. she's wiped out. it makes the reader trust the author as an authority on teenage issues. it uses emotional language to the reader experience elisa's daily challenges. it presents facts to support the long hours elisa is required to work.