What is the single most important problem that should be addressed in this paragraph during global revision?
It's really not that hard. I know several people who have built houses. Some of
them were simple houses, but one was really nice. It had a swimming pool.
Two were in really nice neighborhoods with great views. It took them a lot of
time and cost a lot of money; it was pretty hard work. I used to visit them all
the time. Anyway, that's the way it is.
A. Spelling
B. Thesis
C. Paragraph development
D. Organization

Read the following excerpt from "dark tower" by claude mckay before you choose your answer. "we shall not always plant while others reap the golden increment of bursting fruit, nor always countenance, abject and mute, that lesser men should hold their brothers cheap; not everlastingly while others sleep shall we beguile their limbs with mellow flute, not always bend to some more subtle brute. we were not made eternally to weep. the night, whose sable breast relieves the stark, white stars, is no less lovely being dark; and there are buds that cannot bloom at all in light, but crumple, piteous, and fall. so in the dark we hid the heart that bleeds, and wait, and tend our agonizing needs." in context, the expression "the night, whose sable breast relieves the stark,/ white stars, is no less lovely being dark; " is best interpreted as a. the light of the stars overpowers the black of night b. the black of night overpowers the light of the stars c. black and white contribute equally to the beauty of the night sky d. black and white continuously compete for prominence in the night sky