Read the beginning of Denise's personal narrative. What problem needs to be fixed in Denise's narrative?
1. Mr. Thompson loves teaching science. 2. Every
single day, he becomes very excited about what he is
talking about. 3. He waves his hands around, and
asks, "Isn't this amazing?" 4. All of his students love
his enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to add a strong example of Mr
Thompson's enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to include herself as a character in
the narrative.
O Denise needs to add a time relationship between
sentences 3 and 4.
O Denise needs to change the pronoun "he" to the
pronoun "we."