can somebody please give me an essay outline/rubric/sentence starters/paragraph put together helpers for comparing two authors arguments, with evidence and explanations

if this isnt a true or false than they have equal amount of importants

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.