"Let's face it. You're not the Charlie who came in here seventeen years ago-not even the same Charlie of four months ago. You haven't talked about it. It's your own affair. Maybe a miracle of some kind-who knows?
But you've changed into a very smart young man. And operating the dough mixer and delivering packages is
no work for a smart young man."

-Revise the paragraph into one that is "telling" instead of "showing" an emotion.