I wrote a paper on Egypt, can you read over it and tell me what mistakes I made. Please do not just say, "everything looks good" Point out any ways I could make it better.

i don't think that you should. it looks amazing to me! it is definitely a lot better than the things that i can draw ; ~ ;

not exaxtly

explanation: it depends on the situation like if u do something good there will be good consequences which arent punishments but if you do somthing bad there will be bad consequences which are punishements.

the turtle carries new life, oat seeds, over to the other side of the highway and plants them there.

the answer is b "spewing black smoke", i took the test and got 100%   hope i