Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer. Please plan to next week return.

Tiana always aims to completely, efficiently, and without error finish her homework.

You must force yourself to really think before making a final decision.

I advised them to at least explore some new options.

The best persuasive essay topics a.are the ones that are popular,that many other people are writing about b.are ones you feel strongly about and that can be backed up by outside sources c.are one you feel strongly about,whether or not there is outside evidence for support

Read the excerpt from chapter 6 of  animal farm.by the autumn the animals were tired but happy. they had had a hard year, and after the sale of part of the hay and corn, the stores of food for the winter were none too plentiful, but the windmill compensated for everything. it was almost half built now.how does the pacing of this passage affect the reader’s interpretation of the text? a flashback to earlier events provides a pause in the pacing to slow events down.foreshadowing of events provides information as to what will happen to the windmill.the pace of the text quickens to convey the characters’ resolve to finish the windmill.the pace of the text quickens to move the story to its climax, the completion of the windmill.

Using the impress program, you can add multimedia files, including audio, image, and video files, to the presentation by using the insert menu. the media menu. the edit menu. the add menu.