Rewrite the paragraph so all subjects and verbs agree. The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.

The PTA agreed to fund a field trip in the fall. The class of the seventh grade voted for the destination of the trip. While some voted for the zological, others voted for the museum. After the vote, the student council announced that the zological was the winning destination.

Explanation:

The verbs have been modified so that everyone can present themselves in the past tense, since the narration indicates that the events have already happened. This is because if the winning destination has already been chosen, it means that PTA authorization and class voting have already taken place.

Some modifications were made to make the paragraph more coherent and cohesive, allowing a more fluid and effective reading.

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