First go to the bank then the store after that go home how do i rewrite that

First go to the store then to the bank after that go home

Firstly, I go to the bank, then I proceed to the store to buy some candy, afterwards I walk home with a bag of full fo sweets.

Explanation:

Sometimes you just need to put a little bit more detail within the sentence and DON’T forget the commas.

as you read the passage below, consider how dana gioia uses

evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas expressed.

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