The author wanted to revise this story to allow readers to understand more fully how Coach Wilkins felt about the banquet and his career. What change would be MOST effective?

- the heat nearly killed them that first summer.

it’s important not to respond to the bully because doing so generally just escalates the problem.

tell a trusted adult about what is happening and save the evidence. you should also let your internet or cell phone provider know, along with the operator of the site if it is happening online.

if the bullying continues, notify the local police and consider consulting an attorney if it becomes serious.

school authorities may also become involved if it involves students on campus.