Read this excerpt from a student's analytical ennay, I think poetry allows Alice to communicate more effectively with the unusual citizens of the
Looking-Glass land,
2. Which is the best way to revise this sentence to give it a more formal style? (1 point)
Delete the casual phrase "I think."
Delete the word "unusual."
Revise the entire sentence,
Revise some of the word choices,

A

Explanation:

Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you ... C. when the person or thing performing the action is a proper noun ... Provide additional support for the topic sentence, and revise the whole paragraph ..

the cost of attendance or coa is an approximate budget for the cost of attendance of the whole academic year. in order to calculate this, universities take into consideration many factors like room and board, tuitions and fees, books, transportation and personal expenses such as medicine, laundry, clothing. all these factors combined make up the final sum to the cost of attendance in each university.

one of the central themes of edward abbey's work has been his staunch opposition to the glen canyon dam on the colorado river that created lake powell, destroying stunning scenery and wildlife habitat, endangering many rare species of fish and animals, and also irreparably destroying many important archaeological sites which provided information about the early inhabitants of the united states.