Make this sentence more descriptive. The German shepherd growled angrily at Kendrick when he jumped over the fence to retrieve his ball.

The German shepherd growled at Kendrick when jumping the fence to retrieve his ball.

Growling angrily, the massive German shepherd startled Kendrick who was quickly jumping over the white picket fence to retrieve his worn baseball.  

Explanation:

The first  version is confusing.  A reader may not understand if Kendrick or the dog is jumping over the fence with the use of "he".  By clarifying this and including more active, descriptive words, we can create a better sentence.

gatsby's clothes have a symbolic meaning, as the use of colour and fabric in his clothing demonstrates his hope, dreams, and wealth. gatsby's clothing symbolizes his wealth through his torn shirt, his silver and gold suit, and his english shirts.

there is no short story here so that i can answer the question.