Read the paragraph Wyatt is writing IAJ My brothers drove to the lake to go fishing (Bj They woke up early and spent the whole day there. C On the bridge, they caught an
extremely big fish Dj They stayed on it for hours, (EJ My brothers love to tell this story and they tell it with a lot of enthusiasm
In the paragraph, Wyatt uses a pronoun that makes a sentence undear,
Which change makes Wyatt's paragraph the most dear
1. In sentence B, change "there" to "at the lake,"
2. In sentence C, change "they" to "my brothers,"
O 3. In sentence D, change "it" to "the bridge."
4. In sentence E, change they" to "my brothers."

In sentence D, change "it" to "the bridge."

Explanation:

In the sentence D, ''it'' should be changed to ''to bridge'' because of the previous sentence in which he said that his brothers had caught an extremly big fish. Because of the previous sentence, he should change it to ''the bridge'' because the readers can think that they have stayed on the big fish that they caught which would be absurd, and in that way, this paragraph would make no sense.

The other usage of ''They'' and ''My brothers'' is good because it is balanced in the paragraph. In every second sentence he is using ''They'' and after that ''My brothers'' so the readers have a good perception of his thoughts.

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