10. Hailey is working on a research paper for her literature course. She prepared her thesis statement and outline, and then developed her first draft. Now it is time to review what she has written and make any necessary changes. As she revises her paper, Hailey should

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[...] As she revises her paper, Hailey should NOT .

develop a list of keywords to further research her topic  

Explanation:

The list of keywords and the research to deepen the topics shown in the outline of a thesis, essay, or any other academic text should not be done during the revision of the text outline, but before, during the elaboration of the outline. This is because in order to draft a text, the author must have already searched for keywords that help him to deepen the ideas he has allowing him to make a well-structured sketch that will give rise to a well-done text coherent and cohesive.

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the passage can be best described as: "the british legislature extended an unwarranted jurisdiction".

we can say that because the text clearly states how the people of the colonies warned the british about their excessive desire to rule over them, without taking into consideration the difficulties their brothers had experienced in america: they struggled to establish the colonies, to adapt to new types of weather, fight with the natives, etc., and how they now see (or then saw) the only way out was to cut all ties with the british, since they ignored the people's petitions.