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Hello, could could you guys help me revise my revise my paragraph. Doesn't have to be a crazy amount of changes, just pick out better and make it sound smart :D The Komodo Dragon is an incredibly strong animal that poses a huge threat to the villagers of an Indonesian town. Some background information on the Komodo dragon is that they are a massive reptile, according to the article Komodo Dragon “The imposing giant Komodo dragons reach a length of up to 10 feet (3 meters) and weigh approximately 300 pounds (135 kilograms).”. The dragon also has a lot of physical strength and adaptions so they can gobble up their prey, the source Komodo Dragon states “Their large flexible skulls are adapted to accommodate the large chunks of flesh that these animals gulp down. Their powerful jaws are equipped with about 60 razor-sharp, serrated teeth that are replaced quite often.”. All these features make the Komodo dragon more dangerous to the villagers. The dragon has injured and killed many humans before which terrifies the villagers.

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