Which of these points should be part of a checklist for revising a film review?

hello there!

if i was with a celebrity, i would be with andrew lincoln from the walking dead. this is because i love his work he has done in the show and he is a great actor!

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?

yo it cool and all : )

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