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Jellyfish have a negative impact on humans. According to Rosalind Fonem jellyfish do not have a brain, a heart, or blood but they are causing problems for many places. Because there is a drastic decline of the fish population, fish industries are losing millions of dollars everyday. Also in many places several power plants are getting shut down due to clogged pipes. This leads to thousands of people being without electricity. On Top of this fishermen were scared of the glowing lights of the jellyfish. They think it was a monster surrounding the ship—ready to ingest it and all the people onboard. Jellyfish are really harmful to humans because of their sting. The jellyfish body can inject people with venom. Most often they result in immediate pain and red, irritated marks on the skin. Some jellyfish stings may cause more whole-body illness.

Read the excerpt from the dark game: true spy stories from invisible ink to cia moles. yet, by the time robert e. lee surrendered to ulysses grant at appomattox, virginia, some four years later, about 620,000 soldiers had died on the battlefields, more than american battle deaths in all other wars from the revolution through the vietnam war. what is the author’s primary purpose for including this detail? to inform readers about the differences between three military conflicts to persuade readers of the seriousness of the american civil war to entertain readers with tales from behind the lines of battle to encourage readers to visit battlegrounds in appomattox, virginia

Read the excerpts from part 3 of "an occurrence at owl creek bridge." a rising sheet of water curved over him, fell down upon him, blinded him, strangled him! the cannon had taken a hand in the game. as he shook his head free from the commotion of the smitten water he heard the deflected shot humming through the air ahead, and in an instant it was cracking and smashing the branches in the forest beyond. *** a whiz and rattle of grapeshot among the branches high above his head roused him from his dream. the baffled cannoneer had fired him a random farewell. he sprang to his feet, rushed up the sloping bank, and plunged into the forest. *** as he is about to clasp her he feels a stunning blow upon the back of the neck; a blinding white light blazes all about him with a sound like the shock of a cannon—then all is darkness and silence! what function does the motif of the cannon serve throughout the story? the cannon continually pushes farquhar to continue his journey through his dream and back to reality. the cannon encourages farquhar to investigate whether his escape was a dream or reality. the cannon reminds farquhar that time is subjective and encourages him to move quickly in order to reach his home. the cannon represents farquhar’s romantic dream that he escaped his execution and will return home.

What is the missing statement in step 3 of the proof? given: z1 is complementary to 22. 22 is complementary to 23. prove: m_1 = m23 m21 = m2 m2 1 + m22 = 90° m22 = m23 m22 + m23 = 180° 2 statements 21 is comp. to 22 2. 22 is comp. to 23 3. ? 4. mz1 - 90°-m22 m22+m23 = 90° 6. m23 = 90°-m22 7 m21 - m23 reasons 1. given 2. given 3. def of comp. zs 4. subtr equality prop. 5. def. of comp. 25 6 subtr. equality prop 17. trans. prop. vo