Evaluate Equiano’s sentence fluency. Once, for a few days, I was let out to fit a vessel, and I had no victuals allowed me by either party; at last I told my master of this treatment, and he took me away from it. In many of the estates, on the different islands where I used to be sent for rum or sugar, they would not deliver it to me, or any other negro; he was therefore obliged to send a white man along with me to those places; and then he used to pay him from fix to ten pisterines a day.

—The Interesting Narrative of the Life

of Olaudah Equiano

Overall, the fluency is best described as

natural and flowing.

choppy and incomplete.

loose and unstructured.

inconsistent and unconnected.

Overall, the fluency is best described as  natural and flowing.

Explanation:

Fluency is the flow or frequency of the rhythm of the narration. It involves the smoothness or ease with which a story is narrated or told.

In his autobiography "The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano", the author and narrator Olaudah Equiano narrates how he was treated as a slave. The book is a work that is intended to bring the plight of the slaves for the whole world to witness and see the discrimination they faced. The particular passage/ excerpt provided in the question possess a fluency that is natural and free-flowing, possessing no hard words or any real complications in the flow of the narration.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

explanation:

b the manazanar relocation center was located in california. it was used to keep japanise from spying on america.

the reasons for the harsh treatment, is because japan used tourist to take pictures and snapshots of pearl harbor.

many americans were afraid that the japanise would betray them for their mother country. through and means necessary. this means that, the leadership in japan is a lot different than it is here. culture and family ties has much to do with their outlook and worldview.