how effective is the technique used by the author in the creating suspense in the story in story jamican fragment

We can assume that the Jamaican Fragment is a real life experience, rather than a piece of fiction due to first person writing style.The author uses everyday language to create the casual tone

Explanation:

brutus overlooks that the majority of the crowd served julius caesar the military general. he appeals to their citizenship as romans by calling them first by that name in his salutation: "romans, countrymen, lovers." mark antony, however, speaks in terms understood by the military, by calling them first by, "friends, romans, countrymen." he recalls not only caesar the general but caesar the friend, whose body they see covered with stab wounds.

the objective should be switched