Opinions on my small hero essay so far please tell me how to improve it. My hero is Keanu Reeves. I chose Keanu because he inspires me to try no matter what to just get back up and try again. When Keanu was young he was expelled. After he was expelled from school he got back up and went to college.

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My hero is Kanu Reeves, The reason I chose him was because he inspires me to try my hardest  no matter what comes in my way; and to get back up if i fall down and try again. When Keanu was you he was expelled from school for(whatever he was expelled for). After he was expelled he took his consequences and got back up on his feet and went to college.

bildungsroman is a german word for novel covering youth to adulthood which describes a coming-of-age story

imparadis't in one anothers arms  

the happier eden, shall enjoy their fill  

of bliss on bliss, while i to hell am thrust,  

where neither joy nor love, but fierce desire,  

among our other torments not the least,  

still unfulfill'd with pain of longing pines;  

yet let me not forget what i have gain'd  

from their own mouths; all is not theirs it seems:  

one fatal tree there stands of knowledge call'd,  

forbidden them to taste: knowledge forbidd'n?  

suspicious, reasonless. why should their lord  

envie them that? can it be sin to know,