English, 28.09.2019 06:30 mustafakhalil02

What is the best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning?

the wedding of the bride and groom that was held in a local park was interrupted by an unexpected rainstorm, which drenched the wedding party and the guests.

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a the bride and groom of the wedding were drenched in a local park by a sudden rainstorm.

b an unexpected rainstorm drenched everyone in a local park.

c a wedding held in a local park was ruined for the bride, her groom, and their guests.

da rainstorm interrupted a wedding in a local park, drenching everyone attending.

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