Fiction writers often use figurative language, such as simile, personification, metaphor, and alliteration, to add depth to their writing. In your opinion, how can a writer’s use of figurative language benefit and improve his or her story? Write your response in about two paragraphs.

Using figurative language allows the reader of the story to paint images in their head as to what is happening, as it’s tells a more detailed way of something happening. It’s one of the many elements of storytelling and makes you feel like you are actually experiencing what the character is, thus is creates a better story for you and a more believable one for the character. Figurative language is a crucial factor when writing something, as it carries a big role in the reaction to the character and the situation around them.

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