3. Revise the following paragraph from a student essay. Focus on making the main claim clearer, strengthening the evidence, and addressing problems with plagiarism and improper use of sources. You
may choose to use portions of the paragraph as they are written. Underline any phrases or sentences
that you copy from the original paragraph. (15 points)

Student paragraph: Friendships are good for you. They can help you become the person you have always
wanted to be. Psychiatrist Joan Johnson: People with strong friendships report that they feel fulfilled in
all areas of their lives, including their careers, while those without strong friendships state they are
dissatisfied with their lives (see page 57). Joan Johnson on page 90: "A good friend will listen and be a
sounding board when you are trying to decide what job field you want to pursue or which job to take."
Friends are supportive about lives. They are good sounding boards.

Friendships can be good to you because they can help you become a person you thought you would never be. "Psychiatrist Joan Johnson said, "People with strong friendship and relationships report that they feel fulfilled in all areas of their lives including their careers, while those without strong friendships state that they are dissatisfied with their lives." In my opinion, Good friends will stick with you even if your in a dark place and need assistance and need help getting through that dark place in their life. Only certain friends will support you. That's why you need to be careful of how you choose your friends to be around, you need to watch and see how they act around other people, if they treat them all nice in front of their face and then go and talk behind they're back then that is not a good person you need to be around.

send me the article because i do not know wich one it is

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