Is "they bleached their brown-black hair until it took on the color and brittleness of hay." A phrase?

Create an explanatory essay outlining a technological advancement during the industrial revolution in england, and how this advancement impacted the workers. compare this information with information you have researched about a twenty-first century hardware invention, how this has changed lives, and how the workers who create the hardware are impacted. construct a strong conclusion, making a connection between technology of the past and present.

Read the passage.which statement best describes how pacing of events heightens tension

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?