The conclusion to Doug's essay on the importance of arts education in schools reads, "While not every student will grow up to become an artist, 1.4% of working Americans are artists." Which of the following rewrites would improve his conclusion?
A. No improvement is needed.

B. Artists are very important and we should produce more of them.

C. While not every student will grow up to become an artist, making and appreciating art can enrich every life.

D. We teach health even though only 0.7% of working Americans are doctors, yet 1.4% of working Americans are artists.

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explanation:

what class or school are you in i may

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it