Revising the shift in tone

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Haow does shakespeare use of supernatural to create suspence in macbeth

Read this passage.my career in journalism has taught me the challenges of capturing sporting events, yet gregor powell's descriptions are flawless. powell is a gold-medal paralympic swimmer, but his memoir proves that his true strength is the power of his insights.what feature distinguishes this passage as a foreword?