Rate the first chapter of my book that I'm thinking about publishing Chapter 1: Ash’s House

Hi my name is Angie. I am a teen that lives in California. I live with two other people who are my parents. My Mom will be going to Las Vegas for a business trip. She will be gone for a month and two weeks. That means that I will be staying with my dad for a whole month and two weeks. This is going to be a very very bad month and two weeks.

My Father is a tall man who does not like being interrupted, dirty, stared at, and of course he hates people being in his office when he is working. Well that was going to be a big problem when mother is going away. Mother called me downstairs to say goodbye to her. Before she went out the door father stopped her saying,” Take Angie with you and drop

her off at Ash’s place. I will give her money. The reason I am telling you this is because Ash, Stacey, Luna, and Amber are going to an amusement park and they want Angie to go. I would very much like some PEACE & QUIET, so my dear beloved wife, please take Angie to Ash’s house.”

My mother of course said okay and she took me. My father gave me $250. I remember him saying that I could buy whatever I wanted with this money and I didn’t have to return it. I was so pumped.

When my mom got close to Ash’s house she said to me that she wanted me to have fun and that I know better than to do bad things. She also told me to stay in groups and all stay together, so none of you get lost, and don’t come back home without the rest of the girls. “I love you,” Mom said.