Can someone proofread this? (need this immediately) Making a transition to High School

Although I knew it would be a change from elementary, high school

was a real surprise to me. Three differences especially surprised me the most

and me made realize that high school would be a whole new experience.

One difference I noticed right away is the subjects I am talking w/c are

definitely more advanced. In Elementary I took science and math now have

instead biology and algebra classes. High schools offers also more subjects

than elementary. I find that all the new subjects make the learning more

interesting.

Another surprise was the amount of home work. I find I have twice as

much home work in high school. In elementary, I spent about an hour every

week night doing home work but now I spend about two hours a day,

sometimes even on weekends. Longer library periods however help me get

to some of my homework done during schoolhours. Although the

homework takes longer & is harder before, I usually feel like i’m

accomplishing things.

When I discovered I was having truoble concentrating in library

periods, I realized how much crowded more high school is compared to

elementary. The library are jammed students, many of whom I don’t even

know. with so many Students, high school has more competitive

Atmos phere. Many students are trying out for the same spots on sportsteam

for example. The added competition does a have positive side, however It

keeps me smart. I’m getting used to the idea high school is a Whole new

expereince. Although the differences bet ween elementary and High School

unsettled me at first, I find they all have a strong plusside. The changes such

as the different subjects more homework and bigger a crowd become less

surprising everyday.

Making a transition to High School

Although I knew it would be a change from elementary school, high school

was a total surprise to me. In particular, I was most shocked by three differences that asserted that high school would be an entirely different experience.

One difference that I noticed right away is that the subjects I am taking are definitely more complex and advanced. For example, in Elementary school I took science and math and now I have biology and algebra classes instead. High school also offers more subjects than elementary. I find that with all the new subjects learning has become more interesting.

Another surprise is the amount of homework. I find that I have twice as much homework in high school compared to elementary school. In elementary school I spent about an hour every week night doing homework but now I spend about two hours a day, sometimes even on weekends. However, longer library periods help me get some of my homework done during school hours. Although the homework takes longer and is harder than before, it gives me a sense of accomplishment and fulfillment.

When I discovered I was having trouble concentrating in library periods, I realized how much more crowded high school is compared to Elementary school. The library is jam packed with students, many of whom I don’t even know. With so many students, high school has a more competitive atmosphere. An example of this is seen in the overwhelming number of students trying out for the same spots on the sports teams. Nevertheless, the added rivalry has a beneficial hand, It Keeps me clever.

While the distinctions between elementary and high school are significant, At first, I was unsettled, but now I find that they all have a strong plus side. I’m beginning to embrace the idea that high school is a whole new experience. The changes such as the different subjects, more homework and a bigger crowd become less surprising everyday.

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"a" because he is appealing to logic as oppose to appealing to the audience's emotions.

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