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One day I was on the side of the street and a man needed some cash for some food, I had a little extra cashed saved over, so I proceeded to hand him a tip. He politely thanked me and shook my hand. I went on for the rest of my day feeling great, I made someone's day, I helped them. My friends and family always describe me as a very outgoing, nice, helping character. And I felt like that day really showed.
When I went home I told my mother and the look on her face was spectacular, she was so surprised. She was smiling, and she even gave me a treat after. Later that evening I rememberd the guy that I helped that morning. I guess i'm a pretty nice person after all!
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