PLEASE HELP I WILL GIVE 40 POINTS PLEASE NO BLANK ANSWERS REAL ANSWERS ONLY Directions: For this assessment, you are going to be revising your three-paragraph pre-assessment based on everything that we have learned about text-based writing (The three C's and concluding statements). Remember that you needed to include a claim, evidence from the text, commentary, and a concluding statement.

Prompt from the pre-assessment:

Should public schools offer pricey “high fashion” uniforms? Why or why not?

Should public schools offer pricey “high fashion” uniforms? Why or why not? hok

I think public schools should not offer pricey "high fashion" uniforms because 1.It would cost the school money and 2. Students will not be able to express themselves in uniform.

Explanation:

Now, I dont want to sound mean or anything but rememberthis is your three paragraph assessment and you should put your two sense in. I did start it off for you though : )

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c is a symbol. when bernice gets her hair cut, it is the authors way of showing the affects and demands of pier pressure and the over-all attitudes of people at the time.