You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made. View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.
1. Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
2. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
3. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
4. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
5. Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
6. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
In one document, submit:
1. the original paragraph
2. the revised paragraph
3. the reflection on the changes you have made
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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.

Have you ever wanted to get rid of those pesky vultures? Well do not worry, in the article “Vultures make life difficult” talks about how there is a quite simple way to do this, in the text it states how there is a thing called pyrotechnics. Pyrotechnics are a type of a firework that gets shot into the air and makes not only a loud noise but also bright lights that scare away the vultures. Everyday problems can affect people but as shown in the text there is many ways this can be solved whether its shooting a harmless firework in the air or moving away from it, there is always a solution.