Cambria sang in her school’s talent showcase three songs making her grandparents proud. Which is the best revision of this sentence?

Cambria made her grandparents proud when she sang three songs in her school’s talent showcase.
Making her grandparents proud, Cambria in her school’s talent showcase sung three songs.
Three songs sung in the school’s talent showcase made Cambria’s grandparents proud.
Cambria sung three songs making her grandparents proud of the school’s talent showcase.

the first option

Explanation:

it's less of a mouthful than the other options, and easiest to understand.

taking into account that a theme is the central topic a text treats and can be developed through a story, play, poem etc. the following are themes that can be further developed:  

my best friend jeffrey has many unusual interests. (the story could be about each of the unususal interests)

once a man gives his soul over to evil, he can never go back. (this could be a saying or a proverb)

the three sheepdogs lay around the yard all day. (it could be developed detailing how each of these sheepdogs lay around)

a priest's collar has an unusual effect upon people. (it could be developed detailing the different effect upon people)

innocence is a powerful force in a world full of corruption. (it could be developed detailing how is a world full of corruption)

king lear is a play shakespeare wrote later. (it is just a sentence and doesnt give any idea or topic to be discussed in details.

evil often wears the disguise of innocence. (this could be a saying or a proverb)

rivernaysan = anniversary

for some reason there is another anniversary but, that is correct

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