You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these

So to protect the Komodo dragon from extinction in Indonesia, they put new laws into place. These laws may have brought about increased dangerous behaviors from the lizards. One of the laws they enacted was to ban all non-native animals from the island. This ban included the most popular pet—the dog. The dogs used to discourage Komodo dragons from entering the villages. Another law the Nature Conservancy enacted was to prohibit villagers from feeding the dragons on the outskirts of the village. The first law means the most popular pet, the dog. The dogs used to discourage Komodo dragons from entering the villages. The other law is that when they fed the dragons in the past, the dragons did not come into the village to hunt food.