Prompt You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the scholarship.
You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that
significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a solid
prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants

Well one of the most important things that happened in my life is when my dad left.He left before i was even born so i don't have any memories of him.But im kinda glad he left he always had my mother in constant danger even when she was pregnant with me.So im glad he left i do wish i could have met him though.It did change my life goals in a large way though because I use to wanna grow up to be happy know i wanna be rich and die happy and painlessly.What make me stand apart from other applicants I am determined i am truthful i i Promise to be one of the best got dang workers EVER.

im not sure about this one