SOMEONE CORRECT THIS ESSAY. THANK YOU SO MUCH. Should smoking be banned in public places?
OPENING; In the last twenty years many countries in Europe have banned smoking in public places. This is an issue which most people have clear opinions about.
BODY; On the one hand, smokers are enraged. They feel the ban affects their personal liberty. They say that they have the right to smoke wherever they want. Furthermore, they claim that smoking is no more dangerous than drinking.
On the other hand, most non-smokers are very happy and pleased with this law. For example, they said that they are happy that they can eat in restaurants without breathing in smoke. Moreover, doctors say this law will improve everyone´s health.

CLOSING; In conclusion, in spite of this law affects smokers’ personal liberty, personally I think the law is a good thing, maybe it’s because I am a non-smoker person but, it’s a fact that doctors say this law will improve everyone’s health and that's what actually matters.