Replace the incorrect linking expression in italics with a correct one.

When, then, as soon as, before, etc.

Explanation:

1. He felt much better when he had solved the problem.

2. The weeks went by and then I started to feel better.

3. He put down his suitcase for a minute and then he picked it up again and walked on.

4. When I phoned my sister, she was having a shower.

5. As soon as you get there, please phone and let me know.

6. I used my dictionary a lot before but now I try to guess what the words mean.

7. As soon as I got home, I found my friends had arrived.

8. While you were sleeping, something really interesting happened.

should you be the one doing this journal entry? it says "your special talent or skill". are you gonna lie 'bout your talent and make us fake a talent for you?

also this is a really easy journal entry, you can just think of a skill your good at and write did you work hard to become good at this skill (ex: drawing, writing, math, playing music, etc.) or does it come naturally (like a cool trick that you can do with your body). you can do all of that in 150 words. just try and think of a talent and even if your bad at this talent just say your working hard to become good at it.

a personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. to maximize its impact, the essay should: be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and hope i