Why is this an effective beginning? Read the excerpt from The Boy Who Hamessed the
Wind by William Kamkwamba.
The preparation was complete, so I waited. The
muscles in my arms still burned from having worked so
hard, but now I was finished. The machinery was bolted
and secured. The tower was steady and unmoving
under the weight of twisted steel and plastic. Looking at
it now, it appeared exactly as it was something out of
a dream.
0 It includes details.
It provides context.
It is surprising
It builds suspense.

It was A for me but it might be different for you

honestly, school in itself just seems to be a huge waste of time. a lot of people graduate but still end up not doing anything in college anyways, which really makes the whole point of graduating seem useless. i'd rather not bring anyone's hopes up then. what i'd recommend is for whoever's reading this to simply drop out.

i mean, kanye did it. he said something along the lines of, "don't let society tell you what to do." now, he's obviously a very successful person, and since his album is called the college dropout i guess he never really had to go through all that nonsense in order to become a millionaire. the same goes for anyone else then.

i think the beatles

explanation: they are talked about more.