It was a hot day. I wanted to go to the beach. I called my friend and asked him to come with me. We wanted to take some snacks. We wanted to listen to music. We packed up some stuff and left. The beach was hot too. The sky was blue with no clouds. The water was cold. We hung out all day. It was a good day. Complete the assignment below. Rewrite the paragraph using action verbs and power nouns.

i dont know what you want me to answer

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

can you be more do you have options/ if so, you can put it in the chat or edit your question (

well, i hope this at least : ) :

noun: a temporary state of mind or feeling.

adjective: (especially of music) inducing or suggestive of a particular feeling or state of mind.

examples:

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