analyze the sentence to determine whether it contains a dangling construction or is written correctly. my toothache while hurrying to the dentist

Dangling Construction.

Explanation: "While hurrying" is saying that the tooth was trying to hurry to the dentist. The way this was written makes it sounds as if your tooth was speaking, making it a dangling construction.

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking.