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Bhanu wants her feature article to be precise and concise, Read her draft.
(1) Even if you haven't taken Ms. Stromberg's social studies class, you probably know her. (2) She helps the basketball team. (3) But, earlier
in her life, before coming to our school, Ms. Stromberg had a completely different job. (4) Ms. Stromberg was a lieutenant in the Army!
Select the changes that make Bhanu's article more precise and concise.

in the quotation from passage, connie willis states that literature is a way for authors from the past to communicate with readers of today. we can read their stories, books, and other texts to learn lessons about life. willis refers to these lessons as messages “from beyond the grave.” willis has a favorable viewpoint about the timelessness of literature.

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explanation:

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to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.