Would you rather find yourself rich with money or rich with love?
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Explanation:

    If I were to choose between finding myself rich with money or which with love, I would choose love.  To support my opinion, “Money can feed the body. Love will feed the soul.” –Toni Payne.  This is a very significant quote.  From experience, money does not solve all problems and it can create conflicts as well.  Whereas, love is never-ending and ever-lasting.  No matter how bad things get, you will always have love.  Unlike, money can change people for the best and possibly the worst.  However, love can deeply change a person inside and out for the best.  As you can see, I would rather find myself rich with love.  

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explanation:

dickinson punctuation and lines in her poems to establish a rhythm. each reader will naturally find themselves reading the poem in the same way. she uses the repeating question marks and exclamation points to convey the passion in her words. shelley uses punctuation to paint a picture in the reader's mind. for example, the ellipses after "stand in the dessert" evoke a silence, as it would feel in a deserted, old place.