English, 03.12.2020 02:10 liz3022

Instructions: Copy and paste the following text into a document or create a document that contains the same information. Using your narrative story first draft, complete the following steps to revise your writing.

Voice

Read your story and identify the voice you are using. In one or two sentences, describe how you want your voice to sound.
Based on your description, identify two ways you can improve your writing to make this voice more clear in your story.
Word Choice

Paste one paragraph that you feel could use more interesting word choice below. Revise it with more vivid wording. Pay particular attention to places where you might switch to more active verbs, use precise language, include strong details, employ figurative language, or add dialogue.
Organization

Outline your story in the following way:

First…
Then…
And then…
Finally…
Identify places in your story organization where the series of events could be clearer.
Transitions

Paste the transitions you have used to move between ideas in your story.
Identify any places in your story where you are not using clear transitions. Write new transitions for those parts and paste them here.
Grammar, Structure, Punctuation, Spelling
Identify any errors in your writing mechanics and correct them here.

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