What do you think would have made the essay more effective and why? Your answer should be 3 to 4 sentences.

Thinks that made an essay more effective are follows

I) Tittle (the more interesting the tittle is, the more it would create an impact on reader to read it)

ii) uses of quotes and phrases in essay ( it makes an essay more creative )

iii) uses of simple language rather than using very hard words ( it helps the reader to understand easily )

iv) Creativity

emerson essentially believes that traveling is overrated. he supports this perspective through an initial focus on "the idea" of places like italy, england, and egypt, and the fascination of "educated americans" with them. he argues that those places only took on the grand, majestic ideas that they represent because "they who made england, italy, or greece venerable in the imagination did so by sticking fast where they were, like an axis of the earth." yes, those places are grand, but only because they so clearly represent the places that they are. the art and culture of italy, england, and egypt is authentic, and therefore significant.

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its c

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