So like I wrote a poem can you guys give me feedback on it... Please do not still it it is about anxiety We search for an escape.
A way to remove the words
They just barge in
And then we break

It is as if they are infinite
And wait for the moment were happy
To force them upon us

It seems to fade
But then comes back stronger
I guess it is just easier to except it

It is as if it grabs us
And forces us into the darkest holes
It takes our breath
And makes us shake

We want to quit
As confusion and dark impressions
Enclose on us.

We close our eyes
To find an escape
Everything seems to go still

Relief washed over
The darkness fades

We have to learn to face it
Because the truth is,
It never goes away

-hannah

Plz im willing to put all my points on the line for this so it would be very nice if u guys could (there is also brainliest on the line)think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for dramatldr i need a 500- 600 word argument that is understandable ot a high school audience