3. Instructions: Summarize the passage below in at least two or three sentences. Then evaluate the passage, focusing
on the quality of the details included. Which portions of the passage do not provide enough detail to help
the reader understand the topic? Why? After you have evaluated the passage, revise it to improve the
quality of its details. In your revision, show which parts of the original paragraph you are using by
underlining them. Note: You may need to make up information to add to the paragraph.

"Used MP3 Player for Sale
I'm selling my used MP3 player. I've had it for a few years. It usually works. It has lots of memory. There
are some good songs on it, too. There's a case also. I'd like to get at least half of what I paid for it. Email